captain.classy

Hiya! Classy here, as requested! Let us get started here... About your last two lines: Do we all really not know we're controlling ourselves? I know I am. I am ...

Less and less for me to say every new installment! Very few people were out, and they took little notice of the dark-clad figure making his way to the bailey ...

As they neared Sothil, he dismounted and pulled the small cloak that Vergal had given to him around his body, hiding the sword and dagger from view. He led Snowflurry ...

Hiya! It seems as though you always have something to say about my works, so I though I would repay you. I am going to read all three installments of ...

It's not long, just by the way. Okay, so I'm doing this new reviewing thing where I don't do nit picks. You have some grammar mistakes in here, but if ...

Just to provide you with the basics-- So this is very unnecessary, I think. It's not very poetic, and makes your poem seem like you're making a list, which is ...

This was very interesting. Now onto the review. “Doctor Williams,” said a dry, deep, hoarse voice. Who is saying this? He was Jack Gareth. He was 14 You already said ...

Pink! Okay, here, as requested. I whipped it forwards and slapped the back of Mark’s head . His head bobbed and I heard the satisfying sound of hand on head ...

Pecan! I loves you! haha okay, on to the review. So I really like this. I love the title especially. It reminded me of the Beatles. But, it also reminded ...

Hiya, Classy here. Phew! I am so glad you don't have dialogue in here. Lol, just kidding. So I am very confused. I also think you should have added more ...

Hiya! You caught my attention, though the way this is written annoys me. Don't take it personally, I just am very strict about caps and punctuation. So one, the caps ...

A very random poem. Let me elaborate: I would cut through the paper-thin paper Okay, so this line is getting me nowhere. You say that the paper is paper-thin? Does ...

Hiya, Classy here. Let's get started... Your story is very 'cliche.' If you don't know what that means, it's boring, overused, and uninteresting. Not saying your story isn't uninteresting, just ...

Hiya, Classy here! On to the review: Just a few nit picks: The sky was filled with soft cottony clouds that caressed the sun’s rays with a light touch; I ...

I don't care if you and everyone else in the world hates this, I love it. (just saying.) And I don't say that a bunch with YWS poetry, so bravo. ...