cannoncomplex

Hi there just as I promise. Okay, the story has two perspective of nana (grandma) and the kid. lets start with the kid. Okay, the overall look is that the ...

Well, I think that the story was indeed cute in the perspective of the dog worrying about his owner, and I like how you put something human to the dog ...

Well, the story here has a circular plot that is involve especcially how the story began with the fields and ends at the same time. it gets more circular by ...

Hi, Cannoncomplex here Okay, the story you presented started off with a bit of the haunted house dare theme were the boy want to prove that there was nothing wrong ...

hey there, Cannon here. I'm going to analyze your story. Okay, the plot it seems to be seperated in three ways. the first way was the the encounter with the ...

Hey there, an interesting argument here. I've been hearing a lot of these argument these days and I would like to reply to your argument, just to give some pros ...

Ah, another religion essay Hey, Keith, CannonComplex here to critique your work. Well, i read your essay and find it interesting. the title gave me an insight of something anti-religion ...

cannoncomplex here to comment, okay the story is a little muddled but I can see that it was exploring the concept of reality/illusion in the way that the character in ...

cannoncomplex here, An interesting text. I like reading texts about religions and dialogues between them. I would comment one each paragraph, giving my own insights to your text. The first ...

interesting passage cannoncomplex here, first off, my general impression is that this piece has a sense that a character is giving his/her own perspective on the surroundings. This has been ...

cannoncomplex here to review the work, okay, my general impression was that the story lack a little depth and meaning to the laundry basket. From the spoiler, you indicated that ...

cannoncomplex here, And from the warning, i guessed you were right but the part with the knifing was a little surprise. Anyway, i'll review the story through context. Avoiding the ...

ah, I like the concept in this piece for the usage of the second point of view and the wildfire. That is good but one thing that strike is that ...

hi, i'm cannoncomplex and here to review your work okay as far as i read, this does seem like a short story but it got the mood of an autobiography. ...

Hello... Before i would comment, I would say that was indeed a mouthful, especcially the experience you got. That's greatly sad and dissapointing particularly the events that had been witnessed ...