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The old, beat up laundry basket was dropped carelessly onto the ground after the woman had taken out all the whites. She opened up the washer door and shoved the clothes inside. Then, opening the dryer, she piled all the dry white fabrics hastily into the basket.
Well that seem to be some fairly typical laundry things that we're starting off with here. Certainly not much happening here besides that and well we are talking about a laundry basket so that makes as lot of sense. I am loving the way that you've managed to bring this piece to life so far. Let's see what more we learn about this laundry basket.
The white shirts and socks bounced around loosely in the basket as the it was carried up the wooden stairs. The woman hit hard wood floor and stepping into a carpeted room, putting the basket on the soft bed.
She sighed as she examined the condition, the basket looked like it had been in World War 2. The plastic was scratched and cut and dirty in some spots. The woman needed a new one, but it would just mean spending another two dollars on something that wasn't nessesary.
Oooh I like this. We're giving this laundry basket a bit of a history here, now that suddenly makes things a lot more interesting that just the fact that laundry is being piled into it. I love how much of an extra dimension it adds to it although the reason for not buying a new one turning out to simply be the waste of money is a bit of letdown right after we learn of this history.
She removed all the clothes leisurely now, taking her time to fold each piece of white clothing carefully. She hummed a soft tune happily as she folded. Once finished, the basket was left on the bed until she had delivered all the clothing to their rightful order. When she came back, she took the ancient laundry basket into her grasp and walked onto the floor again.
Looking down the stairs, she tossed the basket carelessly down the wooden stairs; it was loud as it fell, far far down until it hit the stone tiles at the bottom of the stairs. The laundry basket waiting for the washer to beep, and the next load of clothes to be finished.
Okayy well that is about par for the course with what you expect a laundry basket to be treated as, although that doesn't exactly make things better here. You do feel an odd bit of sadness somehow. I suppose you can't expect much more although I'm maybe just used to stories that focus on little things like that generally having some sort of extra sentiment attached to it.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
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Harry
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