canislupis

Iliked this better as a sunflower, but as Misty said, do sunflowers have thorns?????? anyway, it's better like this.

This was incredibly random, and slightly confusing. Platypi are cool, but I doubt that they would make good pets. Did you know they have a poisonous spur behind their front ...

thanks everybody, for the reviews. Kyte:You'll see! This is the prologue, and I didn't want all of it to make sense. Azila: thanks for the review! I'll keep your suggestions ...

Thanks! I actually meant for this to be a first chapter to something, but I only wanted to post this. I guess I was just trying to cram everything into ...

This is slightly better, but like kitty15 said, not THAT much different. You still have a big problem with spelling, grammar, and punctuation. If you just type this into a ...

pretty good. One comment is that the link you posted didn't work when I clicked on them, one got me to the homepage and the other didn't exsist. Just me? ...

I thought this was really good. The first cresent was a little information droppy, but this one was much better. the dialogue sounds great and the story flows nicely. PM ...

Thanks for the reviews! This was a story I wrote about three years ago, and I haven't really edited it. I'll be editing soon.... Azila: How did you find out ...

WE ALL DO love cheese! hehehehe this was good. I like the anothology idea, why don't you do it??????

This was ok, interesting in that it's pink. straighten out the grammar and punctuation.

This is much much MUCH better. Did you type this on word or just put it in directly? I would recommend that you make a word document first, as that ...

This is nice, it has an almost poetic feeling. However, it is a bit repetitive. I guess there's not much you can do to avoid that though. I like the ...

This was pretty good, but it has grammar and punctuational errors. Try reading it through outloud, I find that it helps. More commas! especially when they are talking to eahc ...

Nice. Funny. ahem... *Dies laughing* Wait! I'm Still Alive! XD

This was funny and really cool. The beggining is a little unclear and confusing, and parts of it aren't really necessary. Other than that I would say good job.