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HAHA!!!! This was really funny. THe one complaint I have is that there are quite a few grammatical errors throughout, which is something worth fixing. Something about the colors is ...

I want to live there too. :D Very moving and original, I really liked the voice. The emotions portrayed are very realistic, and overall I think you did a very ...

Wow, this was very nice. Definitely an interesting plot-twist, I liked it. :D Are you using Word to write this? If so, then it would be very easy to fix ...

Wow, I seem to have gotten behind with this. I seen to have found quite a few errors,which is something you need to take care of. Aside from that, plotwise ...

Very nice! This story keeps getting better and better. I like the way you are posting pictures of the horses on here, since it does give us a very nice ...

Very nice! I liked this as much as the first one, if not better. :D I really like that you are still writing from Nightmare's perspective, and the whole thing ...

Yes, I agree. This was amazingly scary, and I am now going to have nightmares for a month. :D It was a little choppy in the beggining, but nothing you ...

AAAAAAHHH! I think my mouse just moved. :lol: Very Very Very nice. :) Some tense problems and minor punctuation errors, but nothing serious. All in all a very engaging and ...

This was pretty good, but I feel that there is definitely room for improvement. :D I only have a few comments, so here they are. :) First of all, you ...

I gather that this is a preview you got somewhere, and not your own writing? I think I would make this a bit more clear. :lol: so the last one ...

Wow. First off, I really have to say that this is reallly a nice piece of writing, and really the stuff I like to read. :D Also, have you seen ...

Hi! First off, I absolutely LOVE you avatar. Your story is well written, though I found that you used long words excessively. Though this does show us how big your ...

umm, yeah. There are some major issues with this, and not the least of which have been pointed out. But besides that, I found myself reading through quickly, and not ...

HI! First off, I really liked this. Before I get into line by line things, I was going to ask if you have seen my contest. I think that this ...

Well, once again all the line by line things have been taken care of. YOu have an excellent and promising idea hear, but as it has already been said, it ...