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Re: Crossing the Railroad Tracks
No. I couldn't find a hidden meaning, because it wasn't hidden. It was glaring.
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Final Report
Thank you Joshua, I have read some of your work and I will write an appraisal of something of yours soon.
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Concealed
You need to put in a hint of conflict, foreshadow something bigger so we keep reading. You lost me pretty quick
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: No Heartbeat Detections
I'm not a big fan of this simple rhyme scheme and shallow metaphor. But it seems to work on some level so well done.
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Green Flowers
That's nice. I like the addition of the picture too. I hate war, you can say that. That's something you are definitely alloud to hate
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: The Escape of Adam Seth
hmm, not bad. Not bad at all. It wasn't good either. In fact, it's to early to tell because this is so short.
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Story told in Colors
*Yawn* really didn't do much for me, I'm afraid.
Nov 2, 2011