calleighmarie

Thanks, everyone, for all the reviews! I will agree, this is not one of my better poems. To be honest, I wrote this poem right after finishing one portion of ...

The concept seemed boring in retrospect, because it seems like a lot of work to make a poem based on only one word, but it really was an interesting assignment, ...

In response to your other review, I had been thinking about ephemerality and the concept that we are all part of a bigger picture, and the assignment came at a ...

Thanks for the clear review! I added the word "ever" more for flow than conciseness, really. "Flashbacks and memories,/are all we are left with," doesn't quite flow as well, and ...

Thanks! I loved the flighty, fantasy connotation to the word, and I worked hard on the assignment, to do the word justice!

I did get a good grade on it! Of course, my poem also had more thought put into it than a lot of my classmates'! Thanks for the positive review! ...