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Re: Saving Lost Hearts (Inspired By Savior by Rise Against)
This is a very powerful story with potential! Your writing is nice and easy to understand. I just wish that you made more paragraphs to separate the long blocks of ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Chapter One
Wow! This was amazing, eloquent writing! I spotted no spelling or grammatical errors whatsoever. The hook sentence was phenomenal, deceiving the reader into thinking it was going to go one ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: Why am I repeating myself?
This is pretty deep! Haha, I hope you let OrionRising know he inspired you to write this poem. I'd love to know the meaning behind this poem, since it strangely ...
Feb 1, 2014