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Re: Dragon Bait
First off, I'd like to say wow, this is a different sort of story. I love love LOVE modern/fantasy mixes, so I'm thrilled to have found this... and now, for ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Zekyll #1
Yay! First reply! Hmm... well. I'm not going to swoon and say it's marvellous, but I do like it a lot. It's not too wordy to the point of being ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: Tellement de filles #1
Introverted? Definitely. But beautifully so, and I was kept interested the whole way through. The only problem I had with it was the sudden change in the narrator's mood. She ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: Masquerade Prologue
Not to be rude to other peoples' critiques, I find I must contradict someone else's opinion... nothing personal, 'kay? Starting off with a definition *can* be patronizing, but in a ...
Mar 25, 2008
