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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Free

    Hey, it's Caitlin! Okay, to work... :D She will not not look back. ---C--- I like the present-tense here, saying "she will" instead of "she was". Her footsteps pit pat ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Milk & Cream

    Hyello :D I really really liked this. It brought out the anger of domestic violence, and what goes on in the minds of those on the recieving end. However, there ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Happy Pills

    Wow, that was an amazing read. I could visualize what was going on, and could still feel the rythem of the poetry. I can't think of any flaws :) Oh, ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Tribute to Michael Jackson

    Definitely the King. I love him and his music to death. I love hearing good things about him, and I definitely appreciate this tribute. I hate the devil remarks. And ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My day

    Well, hello my friend (okay, that line sounded freakin' creepy when I read it in my head... Anyways...) You know I am Grammarzilla, so poetry doesn't apply very well with ...

    Jul 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: (poem deleted)

    I kind of suck at reviewing right now, so I'll just try my best not to run on: I thought the emotion in this piece was really relatable, and that's ...

    Jun 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

    Wow, do I love this poem! Really, amazing job! (this is my first critique, so forgive me if I rant on) One thing I loved was the repetition, how it ...

    Jun 27, 2009


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites