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Re: Free
Hey, it's Caitlin! Okay, to work... :D She will not not look back. ---C--- I like the present-tense here, saying "she will" instead of "she was". Her footsteps pit pat ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Milk & Cream
Hyello :D I really really liked this. It brought out the anger of domestic violence, and what goes on in the minds of those on the recieving end. However, there ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Happy Pills
Wow, that was an amazing read. I could visualize what was going on, and could still feel the rythem of the poetry. I can't think of any flaws :) Oh, ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: A Tribute to Michael Jackson
Definitely the King. I love him and his music to death. I love hearing good things about him, and I definitely appreciate this tribute. I hate the devil remarks. And ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: My day
Well, hello my friend (okay, that line sounded freakin' creepy when I read it in my head... Anyways...) You know I am Grammarzilla, so poetry doesn't apply very well with ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: (poem deleted)
I kind of suck at reviewing right now, so I'll just try my best not to run on: I thought the emotion in this piece was really relatable, and that's ...
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
Wow, do I love this poem! Really, amazing job! (this is my first critique, so forgive me if I rant on) One thing I loved was the repetition, how it ...
Jun 27, 2009
