caerauboy

thanks for the review the reason its not in capitals for mr man is that I'm trying to show the lack of importance of 'mr man' and dunno is Ely ...

I really enjoyed this poem :) it seems quite a nice, uplifting poem and the imagery created from such simple descriptions is really good.

Hey I think you kept the flow of this going really well, the song seems good and would be an awsome song to rap.

Really good, well done :)