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No idea why that's gone through twice, sorry.

Hello, I think the best way to start off this review is by saying that I absolutely love this! It was fast paced and your character development was amazing, I ...

Herro again, Just letting you know that I put up the second chapter. I've tried to go through both chapters and fix all the grammar mistakes and remove the run ...

Thanking you Priceofwords :)

Hiya, Thank you so much for your review, I can completely see what you mean in all of the points that you have made. I'll go through it and make ...

Hey Hermione, Thank you so much for your review it definitely helps :) I will go through it all and try and fix all the grammar and things. I completely ...

Thank you so much :) I will go through it and try and fix all the capitals and punctuation and stuff, thank you for pointing it out to me, a ...

Anytime Pricey ;)

Why hello there Priceofwords, I came to this comment box to say that your poem is amazing. Like seriously, amazing! I don't think that I can word how much like ...

All good, it's amazing! ^.^

Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...