bumblebee99

Thanks for the review, I originally had more to the second chapter but it seemed more fit to go into the next chapter. So i will post the third chapter ...

You didn't insult me I find constructive criticism more helpful than if you were to say oh yeah it was great I loved it, if you know what a mean. ...

You did not offend me in any way shape or form reviews help me out a lot, It is my first time writing but I do draw so I just ...