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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Castaway

    This is a wonderful poem! It really made me picture the scene and get the mood. My one recommendation is to get rid of the "oh" in the middle. It's ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Narrative Re: A Little Drop of Heaven

    This is a wonderful piece! It's very mysterious and incredibly descriptive. It was a bit confusing to me, but possibly not to others. Also, in the first paragraph there's one ...

    Dec 6, 2013


The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes. *manly blush*
— Arcticus