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Didn't much like the poem subject, it's been a bit overused and this puts people off. Also the language, the variation in it is strange. You use words like "hot" ...

Like person before me said, title's too cliche for such an un-cliche song. I love the "Has holiness betrayed me" although you put and extra has in. It's such a ...

I loved these lyrics. Everybody else has already pointed out all the holes i saw in it so I'll just say that I really want to hear this song sung ...

Ireally liked this poem. It had heart. Though youer rhyming scheme was a bit all over the place, but then again I can't say much since non e of my ...

I did actually like this poem. Although it made me wonder whether the demons in it were actual demons or just metaphors for the evil in the world? I'm sorry ...

I like the chaos this poem described. I remember when I was in year 3. Year 3 was a good year but, I digress :) Honestly I really liked it. ...

I think this was beautifull y written. :) I have also never written a sonnet before, and I think it must have taken considerable talent to write this one. I ...

Although this poem was a little strange I did like it. I like the first three lines the most because that act as a kind of introduction to the atmosphere ...

I liked this poem. It was mysterious and calming with a kind of tranquil nature. Although I do agree that some changes in the language you used could help. Overall ...