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Re: Praying for a New Start
Tell me how you feel, Tell me if what we had was ever real. Because now, you're not what you were. Everything we used to have is just a blur. ...
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Re: Could Have Been Both of Us
You are more than my love, you were my very best friendThe one who we swore that we would stick through it till the end You had it all, my ...
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Re: In the Shadow of Your Wings
I smother it and dim the light which you display so proudly. Yet despite my dark you declare your love for me so very loudly. My tears of rain are ...
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Re: Summer
I like the title choice on this short and simple, now the story however is okay you could have mad it a little longer and more details into it. I ...
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Re: neon flower
i liked how you told the story and how it became to be but to tell you the truth it didnt look like you put any time into it. what ...
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Re: Crazy Glasses
I love how she acts all crazy and he was just all relaxed and didn't show his scared side it was a pretty good poem and I love how the ...
Jun 8, 2011
