bryan

Good job im loving it so far keep it up. Just some advice though; kick up the action just a bit. I want to see some of the scenes become ...

Whoa! Man this was good you gotta keep this going man i loved it. It's got all the literature of a really advanced novel but its amazing how your not ...

First off... I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THIS! "[thinking little of my mother’s icy stare that I can feel upon my father’s feet, watching as though not to trust the steps he ...

This is real good i loved the ryhthym and seriousness of the poem. I could see this as being one of our nations poems that a president might read at ...

Im semi confused by this dude. I dont know if you were intending on being vague but thats how i envisioned it. There was alot of bouncing around and your ...

Amazing. is this a personal experience? I hope not because it is so sad for one to feel so alone and in pain. You really did a great job capturing ...

Jaw dropping really! i can feel all the love in your poem. I think your use of the seasons captures the natural beauty of being in love. I think using ...

Hmm. I actually liked that, in fact i think ill read a few more of your stories. One quick thing though, im confused about the surprise towards the end. Is ...

Hey i really liked this material your awesome!!! You have alot of talent and your very literate. From what i read are you aspiring to become a novelist? Well i ...