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Of course! I look forward to reading further.

Thank you! I really appreciate you specifying the lines and what can be worked on in each. You gave great advice, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I am just ...

Thank you so much for the critique, it is one of my first poems so I am still getting a flow for things. I really appreciate the comment on the ...

I like this a lot, could you expand this character more?