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brooklyn193

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: When he is gone but hope is still here

    Dang. When you used the metaphor "It killed my soul" I knew you were talking about the sadness and despair when he left you. However, that last stanza didn't match ...

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: An Unusual Meeting

    Hello fellow writer, I am fairly new to this website so I'm no expert. Your story was amazing! It had lots of detail and really caught me. However, the ending ...

    Mar 30, 2017


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