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Well between the end of last chapter and the beginning of Cody's part in this it's easy to assume nothing special happened after the guy in the class room shot ...

Very good, you really painted the picture well. And good luck with your story!

That was very nice and well-written! Sorry about whatever happened to you in real life...i hope it gets better. :(

“Please pardon the interruption, but Mr. Favinger, if you could please come to the office immediately. Thank you.” Usually, in the event of a lock down, the person over the ...

I'd say this is more like a novel but that doesn't matter anymore because I'll just be reviewing more and posting new topics from now on. I posted it twice ...

I wanna say something about my comma usage because it'll be obvious to some in this chapter. I put a comma where I want you to pause. If I'm saying ...

Oh lol well it'll be like that all the way through. Best to just pretend that it's not on Disney Channel...more of a PG-13 movie or something. :wink: I'll probably ...

Haha, thanks Trish. You were right about everything. I altered all the things you commented on at least a little bit. Thanks for the review and chapter 2 will be ...