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  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Wow thanks so much for this review! I really appreciate your feedback and it has really encouraged me to continue writing! Thanks a lot AEChronicle!! :)

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Hey Messenger! Thank you very much for this feedback, it is much appreciated! Yes I agree with you there, but the only reason I couldn't reveal further on the killer's ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Wow thanks so much!! This is incredibly flattering because Poe is my favourite writing of all time! I wish I could've written more and added a bunch of details! Word ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Thank you very much for your feedback! I would have loved to write in more detail but this was actually part of my schoolwork; in which there was a 1000 ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Hi Jack! Thank you so much for the feedback, and yeah the reason he killed them is just because he has a messed up mind really! And he thinks he ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Hi mongoose, Thanks so much for this feedback! It has made me feel much better about my writing and I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thank you for finding the ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Moonlight Creek

    Hi Mina! Thanks so much for the feedback! The only reason why it was pretty brief is because the work cannot go over 1000 words, so I had to keep ...

    Jan 12, 2014


You are not the voice in your mind, but the one who is aware of it.
— Eckhart Tolle