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I'll admit I don't know much about poetry at the beginning here, so I'll just give you my general impression. I thought it was nice and upbeat, but the rhymes ...

No reviews yet? Shame. Anyway, great imagery! Your characterization was quick and effective too which was fun to read. I thought the plot was pretty good, but it seemed to ...

Hello Lindabelle, Entertaining read you have here. I enjoyed it! The only thing that bothered me was the very last sentence, which is unfortunate when the rest is pretty good. ...

Hello Nafe! This is my first review on this site, but I'll try to point out a few things. First of all, I liked the twist at the end... to ...