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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Pangaea

    Good idea, but I'm not so fond of the poem itself. The metaphor itself has a great deal of potential. For me, the poem went downhill at "no more are ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hot Air Balloon

    Nice sweet review! It was warming. But that's beside the point, because you completely misinterpreted the poem. The title is an extended metaphor representing the "hot air" or inadequacy of ...

    Mar 16, 2009


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