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Wow, that was great!!! It really captured the depth of the emotion, and i don't no what to say i just thought it was great i loved it. You could ...

WOW This is very good i hope so much that you write more oh PLEASE when i was reading it i was hooked and i didn't even realise it had ...

Wow! I love it. Itis so gripping and you can really feel lenas emotion. I felt sad reading (notin a bad way) Ilove this and it reallly does make you ...

WOW! what can i say? I think this is good and it is very violent and strange. But in a good way. I found it strange how the girl at ...

Very good i like how the ending links to the Beginning. A few things when you say: But where i am the sky is as black as pitch. Is that ...

Well Done! I think this is very gripping and ilike the words you have used throughout the text. Like ... Lure and realistic. I think you did very well on ...

Omgosh i don't know what to say. Well i've got to say that is so great, it felt like i was reading a book i would get out at the ...

I thought this was a great story, it was gripping and made me want to read more, and find out if she dies and what happened to her. Okay just ...

It's not alot, but i just want to know if it's well firstly any good and secondly if it's worth carrying on. Frenzy We had planned it, and we had ...