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This is some of what i have so far please tell me what you think. I have a dream, but nobody seems to think I can do it, but I ...

This is the first chapter. Chapter 1: Text message The one simple text messages that could ruin anyone’s day just arrived in my inbox. Those seven words that make you ...

Please tell me what you think. Chapter 2: Conversation I felt a hand touch my shoulder and gently shake me awake. I got such a fright. “Get away from me.” ...

Chapter 3: Changes I pushed the door of the house open and ran inside. “Catherine?” mum yelled panic in her voice. “Yea, mum it’s me.” I said as she flew ...

Chapter 4: School I jumped up out of bed the next morning as soon as my alarm clock went off. I ran into the bathroom and stared at my new ...

Eddies side of the story: Chapter 1: Break-up Eddies point of view. I knew this would hurt her, but I had to do it I didn’t feel the same way. ...

(Is it worth continuing, please rate out of 10) Chapter 1: Why was everyone staring at me? Did I have something on my face? Did I have something stuck to ...

Please tell me what you think is it good? How can I make the characters better? Chapter 2: All through class I got notes chucked at me one’s that made ...

Chapter 3: I rolled over in my bed to face my alarm clock. 7:45 it shone back at me in bright green numbers. I didn’t want to go to school. ...

PLEASE REVIEW, OR JUST ADD A COMMENT ON WHAT YOU THOUGHT! Authors note: Where it says ‘Billy Loves Rosa Caitlin Kate Peyton Elle.’ Its ment to have crosses through all ...

If anyone had read any other of my storys, you will find the story "The Missing." The same because this is Peytons ((The girls who got kidnapped)) side of the ...

This is a story i have been working on for awhile. Please tell me what you think, i know there are mistakes i just want to see if you think ...

PrologueI was thirteen years old when I was kidnapped. I slept soundly in my bed which was on the second story of my house. Always I use to think that ...

Hey everyone! This is part of a short story i'm writing. I haven't finished it yet, i was just wondering what you guys think about it. Is it good? Should ...

Hey! Here is the ending. Tell me what you think please! And guess what? I'm entering it in the competition, i'm just going to do it, and if i win, ...

Dear Diary 17/2/95They were saying stuff again today. Mostly Sara and James. I wonder if they know how much it hurts? I wonder if they know that every time they ...

I don't know how to delete this...???Please tell me if you know how.Cheers Born.

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