borntobeawriter

Crap! I have no idea why it did this! Thanks to all who (had the patience to) read this!!!

I'm sorry you're going through this. Have you seen the movie Easy A with Emma Stone? This situation reminds me a bit of this. I know you don't see any ...

Just want to butt in and say, yeah, her father is a bad man. In the first chapter, one of the emotions she transfers is his raping her.....

My pleasure!! ^.^

Grrrr Ember! The site erased my reply!! Ok, well, as I was saying, I guess the difference between wishy-washy and mood changes is whether we as readers and you as ...

crrrrrrrrrrap! Where did my reply go???

DEFINITELY think about the reasoning, but the thing is, I like the description of the Shack. But it wouldn't make much sense for Young girls to be going there. So ...

*sigh* I knew I should have caught on to that....

As they continued talking, Jax spun around, then locked his eyes oton Zoey and me. A large smirk grew on his face and he was soon power walking towards us.

While she was showing everyone her haircut, I was like, "what does it look like?! I need to know! NAO." A bit less aggressive than that though. I think I'd ...

Haha, it's funny to see what you guys concentrate on! It seems like you read the chapter differently than Tanya! You focused more on Solea's relationship with Granid and she ...

...........lol now you have to come to Canada to compare our 'warm' weather ;)

Burma, it was my pleasure. It's never easy to have other people read our work, but it's for the best in the long wrong, trust me. We learn so much ...

Daughter! Thank you for the great review. As for the part with the crazy woman, her parents have followed Gaspar and moved over to the side. They are talking to ...

Daughter! So glad you've started posting this. I didn't see much difference with the first version, but it was a pleasure to read Jot again, in all his scaly glory. ...