borntobeawriter

Hey Kaedee, I'm Tanya, here to do a review. Unfortunately . . . I have nothing to point out! :D I didn't see any mistakes and I have no nitpicks. ...

Hi there Krupp, I'm Tanya and I'd love to say that I'm here to do a review but there's nothing to critique! Ranger Hawk has already mentioned what I would ...

Hi, It's me, Tanya again :D She stood at thee edge of a forest the loving and hard work from both my wife and me to get it to where ...

Yikes! I forgot to say hi in the previous chapter! So, Hi! :D Maria walked slowly to a tree and slumped down to the ground, resting her back against the ...

"Maybe he had left, thinking he killed me," Maybe he left, thinking he had killed me' sounds better she had been writing note to King Christoph. writing a note or ...

Hi! I'm Tanya, here to do a review: reaching out its claws to tear her apart... The young woman found herself sitting in a classroom, with the teacher's voice droning ...

Hi Lauren! I just read your two chapters and I am intrigued. Can't wait to read the second part! I loved the flow of it and I have no nitpicks ...

Crap! Suz, now you'll have to send it to me before everyone else...LOL *I'll get here before you next time, Daydreamer*... lol Suz, I love this chapter. Because I read ...

Hey Pink! Everyone got here before me so I don't have any nitpicks. I like the fast pace of this, no issue whatsoever. I assume you will be adding more ...

Hi! Wow, I really like this piece. It was very compelling, I needed to read the next sentence. But now I'm burning up with curiosity. Who is she? Who is ...

Hey Suz, Here for a review, duh lol except he didn’t see or hear the other one that came out from behind a couple of trees. Caught off guard, he ...

Hey Suz, it's me! And guess what? I'm your first review...:D A lone garage was attached to it as well, where my old Mazda hid. Shouldn't it be a Toyota? ...

Hey Pink, thanks for her review :D The lifetime thing will be explained later on, I read her notes about this and it's got nothing on Twilight, don't worry about ...

Hi, here to do a review! I wished I had a Father to comfort me, but he had gone missing many years ago This sentence here seems out of place. ...

Hi Ahmed, Thanks for the compliment about my reviewing skills. Here I go: Every gust of wind caused the men the grip tighter to their sword's hilt . Hmm, the ...