borntobeawriter

Well, duh, it's not Lin. LOL Lars is crazy, but not a liar. Double duh. And of course they would bleed Lin if they thought Lars was the conqueror. His ...

Hey there Icy! How did I not know about this? Well, I do now. Contrary to popular thought, I thought the first chapter was much better. I liked the details ...

hahaha! I was reading your chapter when I got your request. Got an email and I started laughing thinking "That's got to be Skinsy." You made my day lol That ...

Hello there Kagi, stalker of my thread :P Lily, Part of me wishes you could see me right now. Part of me doesn't. Kagi, I'd have to say that this ...

Hey there Burma! I'm Tanya, welcome to YWS! I'm going to change the content rating of this story to 12+. There isn't much 'curse words' but maybe enough to make ...

Hey there Ty! First of all, thank you for the request! Second, here's a quote from the WRFF thread Forum rules 1. Only two review requests every few days. 2. ...

Skinsy, tis me! “That’s the one.” He winked at me, then paused. “You okay? You look like kinda pale, Zo.” The 'like' was too much :D This. Was. My. Favourite. ...

Hey there Skinsy! Tis me, to the rescue! Ok, as everyone else said, this was a great chapter. A thing or two to mention, though. Austin's apology? Lame. He does ...

Skinsy! Okay, I'm here, earlier than I thought I'd be! First off, the opening of this chapter really threw me off. I actually and reread parts of the last chapter. ...

Daughter, tis me! as usual, I loved this. My only critique would be somewhere along Skinsy's thought pattern. I don't normally mind third person POV, but here it really bothered ...

Yuri, Mommy's here! So sorry it took me so long. But I'm here now! Just then you realize your helmet flashlight is still on, and then you start counting mentally ...

Hey there Anna! Aiden slapped a hand over his mouth and widened his eyes at me. I wondered at their fascinating colour before pouting at him. Ok, this part slightly ...

I'm heeeeeeeeere! Yes, tis true! Daughter, I love this piece! I snorted at the first email, thinking "yeah right, dude. Good luck with that one." And my heart tugged at ...

Anna, so glad you've posted!!! the pavements outside a building with flashing neon lights, I had doubts for the tenth time that night. Really? Only ten times? lol “The least ...

Hey there RL! I'm Tanya, here for a review. First things first, this seems to be a good concept. I like the friendship between Bren and Sophie. They seem quite ...