borntobeawriter

Hey there Emmy! I'm Tanya, here for a review! Some might say he was handsome, gorgeous even, but when his eyes fell on mine, locking in place like they belonged ...

Hey Ranger Hawk! Yay! You posted! Thank you! :D On to the nitpicks He put a hand on the knob and suddenly yanked the door open. Someone had been standing ...

Hey Durrie! First reviewer, power to me! :D Chapter 1 In an abrupt movement, she turned and kicked at the desk, pushing it over with its draws spilling open and ...

Hey Lauren! It's my turn to return the favour and review for you! Yay! A young Icarthian woman breathed heavily, pulling sweet, leafy forest air into her lungs. The roughness ...

Haha! Once again, I am first! (bite my dust everyone!! :twisted: ) You were right baby girl; I love this chapter!! I had action and tension and humour, woohoo! Now, ...

Hey there StoryWeaver! Great chapter although I personally preferred the mystery of the prologue. So, this is good, but still needs a little bit of work. I'm just going to ...

Hey there Jackpot. I'm actually reading the Prologue after having read the first chapter. Normally, I'm alright with prologues but not this one. It doesn't add anything to the story, ...

Hey there Jackpot, Tanya here for your first review! Well. Interesting. BUT you need a little help. You character's 'voice' is too formal. I assume that if he's no longer ...

Hey there Justismarez, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Now, I'd like to warn you in advance - this isn't going to be pretty but it should be helpful. I ...

Haha! Hey Emma! Yay, I'm first! You know what's funny? I was reading quietly when I suddenly remembered that I'd hoped you'd post the 6th chapter so I got up ...

MY turn to be first :twisted: Great chapter baby girl, I did NOT like the almost kiss with Jimmy. Only because his name isn't Tony. I DID love the part ...

Ok, turned out I couldn't wait till the end of my little vacation. BUT there better be another chapter when I get back, okay? lol That being said, I agree ...

LOL, well, I definitely don't hate it but I was confused. Once again, the flow was beautiful and honestly I should stop repeating myself but I envy the ease with ...

Well, I love it when there are no mistakes to correct! Haha! Makes my job so much easier. Emma Jane, you are truly a wonderful and talented writer. With every ...

What can I say? I couldn't resist :D Well, I loved this chapter and as before, liked the similies. (Cherry lashes like thousands of spider legs). I would have also ...