borntobeawriter

Hey Kaywiia, Well, I've never reviewed lyrics before so this won't be very technical but I rt meally liked it. I could feel myself swaying to the unheard music. It ...

Hey there Raven, I'm Tanya, here for a review! First of all, the beginning was intriguing, interesting. COuldn't wait to learn more, then you change to Peyton's scene. A few ...

Hey there Sodapop, First of all, I'm Tanya, pleased to meet you. Second of all, I LOVED this part, I let out a shriek that permeated through my dreams. I ...

Well hey there OverEasy, I'm Tanya, here for a review. I must admit that I am slightly confused. The title said chapter 2 but the beginning of the paragraph is ...

Hey Derek, I'm Tanya, here for a review! :D "Time to wake up Riley!" Vlora stood over my bed screaming There should be a comma betweeen up and Riley. I ...

*Gasp!* First again! I guess Tooth and Ninja Tooth (sorry, can't remember the name you gave him) did their work! Hmm, don't worry if my sister not on here for ...

Hey Shubi, Okay, this review won't be for the weak of heart so brace yourself. I like your storyline, that I do. You have quite the interesting concept, here. That ...

Hey there Callista! I'm Tanya, here for a review! First of all, I love this. My whole body was bone-numbingly cold Jet suggested you get a second opinion and this ...

Well, hi Skins! I guess I'm two reviews too late, everything was already so well critiqued! I haven't much to add. You're right; not much happens but it's simply a ...

Hi there Loller, I'm Tanya, here for a review. An ominous "ka-thunk" echoed throughout the small valley. Birds fluttered lightly overhead, and the morning's mist began to burn off as ...

Hey there Stu! I'm Tanya, here for a review! Born into this world on an isolated island under the glow of a blue moon, son of a farmer. This sentence ...

Curious, I ask, “Is something wrong?” Trenton looked distracted. Trenton looks at me with realization and says, “No, everything is fine What? Huh? You should maybe maybe first that he ...

Hey there KR!! I'm Tanya, here for a review. My thin coat that I wore over my small dress made of beautiful silk that was once my mother’s who died ...

Hey there secrets, I'm Tanya, here for a review. I'm warning you right now - it isn't going to be pretty. But here I am, a mug of hot coffee ...

Hey there Lady, I'm Tanya, pleased to 'meet' you. I won't go through the mistakes made throughout this piece because Bluewaterlily and Stella where rather thorough. I've just come to ...