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Re: Reemergence
Hey Mossyra, I'm Tanya, and it's very nice to meet you. Prologue: So far, you're off to an excellent start. Words obviously flow easily for you, and I was lulled ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 8)
Hey Kr! Here for chapter 8! I smiled, “Sometimes I forget that your human.” you're. It is the contraction of 'you are'. “What’s out there?” Trenton scanned the forest. This ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
Well, Pink, I'm here!! Haha, another great start to a story. Phoenix has already picked out the mistakes I noticed, so I won't go over those. You definitely have me ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Icefire - part 9
Rh! Borntobeawriter is rather pleased that you have posted but you didn't send a PM to borntobeawriter so she COULD review! LOL On to it, then! She felt bedraggled and ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 7)
Hey Kr, I'm Tanya, here for a review! Then he would open his eyes and sit up straight again. I would prefer something like 'he jerked awake and sat up ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Eveline UPDATE 7/23/10
Hey there Ally, I'm Tanya, here for a review! First of all, I haven't read the previous chapters so my review will be solely based on this one. Now, We ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (9)
Ah, yes. Toad. *blushes* Susie's gone to Germany to visit some family, I really don't know if she'll get right back into shifters; she's probably going to be busy. As ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Wilting Rose *100 Points to Every 200+ Word Review!*
Hey Munch, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Well, wow. This was a beautiful piece. I thought it was sweet how Cade shaved off his hair. It doesn't make sense, ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Seven ~ Part Two)
Hey there Skins, But OF COURSE I want to read this! I pleaded with you to restart posting, didn't I? ;) Well, I really liked this chapter. I did feel ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Demon Princess Lilith
Hey greenwitch, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Okay, I like the idea of this story but a few things need to be worked on. First of all, this was ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The God Conspiracy - Preface and Chapter One
Hey Skorpionne, I'm Tanya, nice to meet you. Well, first of all, congrats on the preface. You had me drawn, you were pulling me in like the magnet you mention ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: (WW Book One) Chapter 1: Part 2
Hey Megg, Back again for part 2! Okay, I also liked this chapter but you crammed too much here, to my opinion. I felt that the seventh daughter thing came ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: (WW Book One) Chapter 1: Part 1
Hey Megg, I'm Tanya, pleased to meet you :D I don't know why you need to work on your show; you made it look effortless! The usual. You know? What ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Guardian [1] (Edited)
And I am back for a second review!! They shadows played with her mind but she kept herself poise and unmoving The and poised “I am the number one Guardian ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: The Guardian [1] (Edited)
Hiya Pink! So happy to have you back. *does a happy dance* Well, I've read Keepers, let's see how this one goes. Underworld to wreck havoc and satisfy their own ...
Jul 18, 2010
