borntobeawriter

Hey there Emmy, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Well, this was a good beginning, in my opinion. There's a few nitpicks that I'd like to point out. I tried ...

Hey Kr, thanks for letting me know about the edited version :D My eyes shoot open, my lungs grasping for any air that they could reach. I felt my fingers ...

Hiya Pink, Sorry for the delay! Well, this was pure awesomeness. Seriously. I loved that Luke finally loosened up a bit and I can't wait to see them interact more. ...

Emma, glad you're back! Well, my sister quoted the exact sentence I wanted to. *Sigh* great minds think alike. Seriously, this advanced well. There's one thing, though. If I remember ...

Well hey there Tristessa, and welcome to young writer's :D Okay, I'M going to be blunt here; your story needs much work. Thankfully, you've found us and we'll be able ...

Hey there Pink! Please, don't feel ridiculous about sending us PM's! We don't always have the time to go around and visit the forums and would miss out. Well, PM ...

Really, Rh, what is there to add? haha. Seriously, I loved this chapter and everyone else has pointed the nitpicks. Unlike Stella, though, I'm alright with his reaction. He thinks ...

Hey Pink! Here for a review, yay! :D “Stop it,” I mumbled, awaking from my sleep. I peered up to see my sister, Liliah Ok. It took me a few ...

Hey Lily, Tanya here for a review! Well, the four other reviewers mentioned quite good points so I won't delve into that. Much :D What I wanted to mention is ...

Hey Rh! Well, friend, this is an awesome start to what seems to be an awesome story. Very original, writing from boy's pov for the MC. Very interesting so far. ...

Well hey there Tori, I'm Tanya, here for a review. First of all, I would change the title because it gives the story up right away. That being said, I ...

Hello Mossyra, Here I am, back for the second chapter. But if she went back to sleep, the nightmares would only come again. The air outside was fresh, and it ...

Hey Kr, Here for the 9th, as requested! :D I wake up covered in sweat. My breathing is rapid, my heart beating in my ears. The tips of my fingers ...

Hi vox, Back for the second installement. Well, this was an improvement from what I just read - but not by much. I agree with everything Andy said up there ...

Hey Vox, I'm Tanya and I decided to check out your first chapter. Here are my thoughts: You have created a very interesting world and although I'm a big fan ...