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Re: Sometimes, chapter Fourteen
*likes, likes, LOVES* Oh man, Anna. I found myself grinning while she was showing everyone her hair, hoping it would equally impress Sonny. I couldn't stop grinning! We've ALL been ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Libraeon 2
Hey there Alice! Back for a second! Ok, first off, I just noticed that you joined on the fourth of August: so welcome to YWS! Second, I noticed that you ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Libraeon
Hey there Alice! I clicked on the 'Be the first to review' link on the top left and found your second chapter. Was slightly confused, so went and read the ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Thirteen
Anna! Wow! Like Skins said, it's to the point where I don't even mind when not much is happening, because of the characters. They are fun and you make me ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The playground is burning
Wow, Rach. Just wow. My momstincts are doing good. Because the piece distances itself from the MC. If it had been about when she gets beat down, then no, I ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Princess Lynnea: Chapter II
Hey there! Sorry it took me so much time, but I'm here. First off, you said this could be a stand alone chapter because it was from a different POV. ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 5
Now that's over with, I can't tell you enough how much I'm glad you posted this! You need to take a leaf out of my book and start posting so ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Life After Death Prelude and Chapter 1
Hey there Vanilla, I'm Tanya, one of the judges for the First Chapter Contest, here for a review! First off, I wanted to mention that this was for First chapter ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Calisan and the Lurid Latern of the West
Hey there Dallas! I'm Tanya, one of the judges of the First Chapter Contest, here to review! The moon was shining as bright as its sister, the sun, had just ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Afraid of the Dark Chap. 1
Hey there Meg! I'm Tanya, one of the judges of the First Chapter Contest, and I'm here to review! The dark scared him when he was little, but it was ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Guardian's Creed Prologue: Devil's Peak*REVISION*
Hey there Matthew! I'm Tanya, and I'm one of the judges in the First Chapter contest, here to review! I lay near the edge of the volcano's mouth. This place, ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Girl From Daphnis-- Ch.1
Hey there Lavi! I'm one of the judges of the first chapter contest, here to review! First off: Holy Canoli! What am I supposed to say after those reviews? My ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Runaway - Chapter One
Hey there Celtica! I'm Tanya, and I'm one of the judges in the First Chapter contest you've entered. Thanks for your participation, by the way! Steam pumped out of the ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 19)
Love, love LOVE! One rather huge nitpick, though. Lyrics to a song are copyrighted. I'm trying to find the article that I posted on my sister's story, with no such ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Eleven
Anna! Geez, I can't believe I missed the last chapter too! But I'm here now! The last chapter was amazing. Harriet suffering the consequences of the long nights out, and ...
Jul 27, 2011
