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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [1]

    Ok, I don't usually do this this way but because there has been so many replies, I can't see your chappy when I scroll. So, this way it is! Prologue ...

    Oct 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Elle (Chapter 12, part 1)

    Katieee! haha, This was short and sweet and I much prefer her healing to last one's. You'll explain it further on, though, right? I can't wait to read more, for ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Captive (Part III)

    ah ha! But what IF his father hadn't been murdered? Don't mind me, I was so caught up in this story that I had to add a comment. So, Jenny, ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Captive (Part I)

    Hi Jenny, I'm presently reading your chapters and I find them very good. I'll get to the end of your chapters before replying but I wanted to mention something. You ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Rimwalker

    Hey Kyllorac! The day the First One died was the day the First People were born. One hundred they were in number, springing fully-formed from the First One’s body; fifty ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Untitled: Part One

    Hey there Rain, Tanya here for a review! :D How he would love to take his dusty and old, dark blade to his stomach, but that would have to wait. ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Knots. Prelude, Pt. 1

    Well, Rachael, I'm really glad you reposted it. I enjoyed reading it the second time as much as the first. Like I said before, I find your descriptions to flow ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Munera - 2

    Well hiya there Bickazer, I can honestly say that I haven't read the first chapter but decided to review the second. First of all; wowee. Second of all`WOW!¸ Third: No ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kiss Of Death: Chapter One

    Hey there Tiger, It's probably easiest to say that this blew me away, but that's not quite accurate. This piece isn't the reach-out-and-grab-you-and-pull-you-in-mercilessly sort. This is sort, rather,

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part seven)

    Ignis, last one! Aww, and I was on a roll! ;) Okay this was the last chapter for now, you've got no more for me! haha. There's something I'm wondering ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part six)

    Hahaha, love this chapter! God, the wit in here is incredible! I love your characters, Ignis! Argo is such a clutz! I'm reading your chapter and it reminds me of ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part five)

    Ignis, here again! Seriously, where is everyone? *looks around* Do you Pm your reviewers when you bring out a new chapter? Have you let them know there's more out? Because, ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part four)

    Huh, first one here? I'm honoured! :D Hi Ignis. Well, I liked this chapter. The brevity of it was welcomed and I liked the interaction between Argo and Morgan. I ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part three)

    Hi Ignis, Tanya, back again! Okay, well, I really don't have much to say here. Didn't find any mistakes. It was a long scene, but it needed to be done. ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part two)

    Hi Ignis, Tanya back again! Awww, poor Argos. I wonder what made him come all the way out of the village to climb the tree, though? I really liked this ...

    Oct 24, 2010


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