borntobeawriter

Hey Tiger, Tanya here! Well, as far as I'm concerned, this definitely has some potential. I would enjoy reading some more. I assume that if you were to make it ...

Hello there Emmy, Tanya here for a review! I started reading this piece and I kept thinking, "Wait a minute, I've read this before!" I went back and checked out ...

haha, keeping us on our toes with your spoiler, eh? Well, Katie, your story really is advancing nicely at this point. I'm enjoying more and more with every passing chapter. ...

Hey Katie, Well, not much to say here. I'm liking where this is going. The tenses are still a problem, but you know that. :D Going off to the next ...

Hey Jashy! Sorry for the delay in the review but...I just found out I have a life! haha. Seriously, Mommy's here now. Moist crept up my window as I drove ...

Rachael, Well, not nitpicks, congrats! I really don't have much to say here. You've introduced a new character and she seems sweet but nothing much happened in this chapter. I'm ...

Hey Star! Tanya here for a review! Then the stranger spoke. "Isn't it odd," said the stranger . His voice was faint and eerie, as though it wasn't quite there. ...

Even though you've been spreading rumours about me, Skinsy, I've decided to be your faithful reviewer. :D Am attempted kiss wasn't shameful. Besides, it wasn’t as though I even liked ...

Hey there Bickazer! I still owe you, Sazuk. Considering this me repaying my debt…because it’s as Chief Rannak always says. We Icim are different from humans, because we will go ...

Hey there Star, just saw you posted this and I hurried to read it! Please point out any nitpicks, but there should be no spelling mistakes as I posted it ...

Hey Maddy, Here, for the last review`:D Well, I liked this chapter, but not as much as the previous ones. I found it a little hard to follow at the ...

Hey there Maddy, Just read this chapter and I loved it. At first, when she saw the old man, I kept thinking 'Run away! He's going to kidnap you!" Then ...

Hey there Maddy, I'm Tanya and I was intrigued by this story. There was only one thing bothering me; you should reread your story because your female character's name went ...

Hello Rachael, tis me, your faithful follower! Yay, first chapter posted! I'm glad to be the first. Now, on to the nitpicks. This wasn’t very fair of her, she knew, ...

Hey Ignis, Don't worry about sending me a pm instead of my wall. If would be nice if you posted the link to the page, though ;) Well, as for ...