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Re: Salem [Chapter Three]
Hey there Apple! Tanya here, for a review! Well, Jai was quite thorough with her review, so I won't go there. I'll just mention my overall thoughts. The thing that ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Fly Away (One)
Hey Jayleigh! It was an undiscovered realm where the people of England could escape to and relish in the rich soil and the new found independence. I think it's new-found. ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [14]
Wifey! I'm home! Her steps echo off the walls and she wearing her scrubs with a white coat over. missing a word or one too many, here. She gotten into ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 14 + 15)
Yay! Katie; glad you posted! The guard lead us to massive, wooden doors. He shoves the door with all his strength, opening them to something that I never have seen ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Brevity
Well, wow. I started reading this and thought, "Well, he wasn't kidding about the warning." Then I smiled and kept reading. Seriously, I loved this. It had a funny edge ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: By Blood (Contest entry)
Hey there, Princess I'm Tanya, here for a review :D A human being could only go so long without sleep, and she was pushing the limits. The window would have ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: A Resignation (For Three-Pronged Contest)
Hey there Silent! In the old days, this didn’t matter; everyone knew exactly what made their gardens thrived , and were careful to thank the gnomes in ways that didn’t ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
Skinsy! I'm heeeeeeeeeere! Well, I don't know what all the fuss is about; I really enjoyed this chapter. Especially since I remember the last story so well, I see the ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Racing to Death~Chapter 1
Hey there Reg! Tanya here for a review! “Whats going on?” She asked. She looked a year younger than Sami, with bright red hair. She had freckles that spread cross ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Deep Magic Part 1
Hey there Leth! I'm Tanya. We've 'met' on chat, but I do believe this is my first time reviewing for you. *cracks knuckles* Let the fun begin! Stella sat up ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 6
Hey Bick, Your faithful reviewer here at last! :D “Seriously, musta caught an arm and leg,” Delk said. He examined Kutho, worrying his tiny soul patch beneath his fingers. “I’d ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Eventide (3.1)
Lauren! Crap! Haha! I was half-way through the review and my mouse clicked off! *groans* Well, I'm back! She had spotted a back entrance from where she had left the ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Blood Stains (From my novel)
Gheala, wow. You seriously shouldn't doubt your talent; you obviously aren't lacking in that department. Pink's already gone through the nitpicks I also noticed and really, I have nothing more ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Fly Away (Preface)
Jayleigh; you're alive! Glad to have you back! What's been up with you? Not much to say here; it was a very interesting start to a story. A good hook. ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Racing to Death~Prologue (edited)
Well, wowee *whistles admiringly* Reg, you just definitely keep writing this. It helps that you gave a bit of background, but of course you wouldn't have to do that for ...
Nov 18, 2010
