borntobeawriter

Day, tis me! Your faithful reviewer :D "Was hast du gesagt? What did you say?" foreign words should be in italics. "I feel as if Iam dead", she replied softly, ...

Hey there Pointe, This can’t be real… Ava, in denial , stood beside Kevin, watching Greg sob over Titi’s form. I scratched out in denial, because it's obvious she is, ...

Hello Daughter! First here :D I must say, I have no idea what it is you dislike so much. I thought it was a great chapter, with trickling of information, ...

Hey there Tenyo! Well, RH has already gone through the nitpicks. What I wanted to say was how much your chapter pulled me in. At first, I groaned, thinking, "Not ...

Wow! Well, I saw your name and wanted to review immediately. You've done awesome reviews for both my sister and I, I figured I'd return the favour. But...there's nothing to ...

Hey MC! (Yes, I stole that from Rh mouahahahah) Ok, well, I was going to mention how fast paced this is, but others have beat me to it. I wanted ...

Ultimately up to you? *snorts* Yes, I'm in the body-exploding business. Haha. Don't mind me. I love this dude. I love his voice, I can picture it clearly in my ...

Hey there Paul! Another great chapter! I absolutely loved this. It was fresh, and easy to follow. The words and scenes flowed effortlessly. I love Death. He's such a great ...

Skinsy! Ok, well, I didn't catch the mistakes Lupis did, but I'm tired and my eyes have gone screwy. So, bare with me. Unlike Lupis, it WAS Charlie's behaviour that ...

Ok! I'm here! Sorry about that. Well, you didn't actually ask for a review. *pretends to walk away, then stops, taps her foot* You didn't even try to stop me! ...

Hey there, thanks for the request! First off, I thought this was a beautiful and haunting piece. I loved the dream-like quality of it all. I didn't think it was ...

Hey there Angel, Tanya here for a review! First off, I'm solely basing myself on this one, as I have not read the previous part. That being said, this was ...

Hey there, Tanya here for a review! Ok, I noticed in one of the paragraphs that you wrote 'breath' when it should have been 'breathe'. Of course, I can no ...

Oh wow - what in the world? Ok, well, I've only read chapter one, not the second. But... Because I've only read the first, I clearly remember it, as well ...

Hey there Jedi, Tanya here! Well, I'm not sure what to say. I didn't find anything grammar mistakes or anything. I enjoyed the interaction between the twins, as well as ...