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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Fisherman

    Happy Birthday! *pops confetti* Thank you for requesting this. I'm touched. And really, really depressed. I mean, what's there to add after Skins' oh so helpful review? ;) “Yes,” said ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: To The Shore

    Wifey, tis me! Okay, well, I didn't comment on this because what would be the point? I gave you my opinion. But I was skimming over the comments and I ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Painted Martyr - Excerpt

    Gheala! What a pleasure to read more of your work so soon! II have nothing negative to say about this scene. It was a nice blend of description and dialogue, ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Blackwood Conspiracy

    Hey there Rolf, Sorry for the delay, but I'm here now. Well, Kafka did a pretty thorough review, so I'm simply going to speak of the story. I think you ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (19) Part Two

    Haha, Emmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Thank you for posting this! I love it when bullying works. At first, I thought this was going to be very transitional, you know? Nothing seemed to be ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Wild Ones Ch 5

    Bailey, tis me: your sister from another mother! Even when treed the cougar was formidable, and even more so since in the tree it had a tactical height advantage and ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In Memoriam - Part VI: Turning Away

    Hey there Paul, This was a beautiful end to a great story. I was surprised, because I thought for sure Caleb and Death would end up living death together, but ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey there Fighta, Ok, I just read all four chapters and here are my thoughts. I like the idea of the lone wolf and the other pack. You seem to ...

    Feb 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Story of My Life

    haha, Ignis, hi! Well, I'd love to give you a review but I just don't do poetry. I will say I enjoyed this, though. I thought it flowed nicely and ...

    Feb 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (19) Part One

    Emmmmmmmmaaaaaa! True, we haven't harrassed you. Well, I did, sort of. I posted 'a sentence a day will keep Tanya at bay' on your wall. That must have subconsciously spurred ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old

    Hello Skinsy! Ok, well, Dudette already mentioned the Jennifer part. I was thoroughly confused. I had to reread and see if it was Zo's point of view, or Dick Lemon's ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons - 5

    Daughter, tis me! Okay, I feel really bad for not getting to this before. Actually, I showed up here right after Bailey and was going to comment that technically I ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: In Memoriam - Part V: Ashes, Ashes

    Paul! Sorry for just getting to this, but I was busy and knew that once I started reading this, there was no way I wasn,t going to finish! Well, Kafka ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Stern Egyptian-Novel excerpt

    Gheala, I'm truly sorry I wasn't here before to review. I know how hard it is to pour your heart and soul in something and not get any comeback. These ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH

    Jashy, my dear son, Of course I still loff you. But I have a weird schedule and I'm only back this morning. Well, I don't have much to say, except ...

    Feb 6, 2011


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