borntobeawriter

Lauren, tis me! Kyleigh spun around, getting an eyeful of Jay grasping his bloddied arm as he stood over a Zombie he’d just shot in the head bloodied. I think. ...

Shubhi! Okay, I just read your first chapter, but wanted to comment as a whole. I thought this was great. It had good emotion, good flow. It was easy to ...

Hey there Amie! Back for the third chapter. Ok. Theotherone already pointed out a few things, but I will also. First of all, the date. Before, August 16th 2011, then, ...

Hi there Amie! Sorry it took so long to get to the review but I've been quite busy! Is this the piece you wanted me to review? I would appreciate ...

Emmmma! Ok, I promise I won't get mad at Tooth, only because I got to read something from you. Really, do I demand so much? ;) Emma, I remember reading ...

Hey Kafka! Well, I must say I was dreading reading your piece: it's happened in the past that I really enjoyed other reviewers but always found their stories lacking. Yours ...

Lupis! Thank you so much for the request :D I'm not sure what I can add that Isha hasn't already said. I thought the descriptions and details were amazing. The ...

Jent! Thank you so much for the request! I'm not sure I'm "qualified" to review this. It has so many deeper meanings, such profound insights on life. I'm pretty sure ...

haha, first one here! Boo-ya! Except.....I have nothing to say. No nitpicks, nothing! I'm so glad you posted this. I was browsing through my reviews today, and saw yours. I ...

Oh, wow, Buscador: this is fantastic! Your mc's voice is crystal clear and quite strong. I'm very intrigued by his life, his past and the choices he's made that have ...

Hey there Milk, One day, Paul 5290 (His nickname was Paul) was going out for a walk. He had recently of SKINS , the Paul's God, and wanted to pay ...

Hey there Weaver, Well, I just read chapters 5, 6 and 7. I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'm going to give you my opinions of these ones. I ...

Hey there Luna, I read this on my ipod the other day and wanted to comment, but my ipod keyboard hates me. So, now, here I am! This story reminded ...

Hey there Mask, I'm Tanya, here for a review. Okay, first off I thought this was an interesting beginning. You portray your MC as being hard, but there are instances ...

Orinette, thank you for this! Okay, first off, I wanted to say this: there could never be a long chapter from you. I don't say this to many people, but ...