borntobeawriter

Hey there Gheala! He rushed towards me and I thought he would throw a fist to my face, but the next thing I knew was my hand being empty of ...

Hey there Irene! Their manacle laughter rung in her ears, the horrible parody of her voice they used to repeat her pleas and screams of anguish as she watched her ...

Hey they Sylver, I'm back for the 3rd part! The power of a Siren's Song wasn't what it was in the Age of Magic, but if everyone else was asleep ...

Hey there Sylver! I'm Tanya and I just read part one. Didn't comment because I didn't have anything to add but here I am for part 2! Kei snorted, matching ...

Snoink! Thank you for letting me know *hugs* When I started reading this, I felt a difference in the tone. Your MC seems older, more confident. That doesn't make sense, ...

First, first, first! And I'M at work which means I could get in trouble but... You're worth it

Bailey, tis me! I'm trying to figure out what I hate most: Reviewing after Azila, because I never have anything clever to add or reviewing before Azila and I look ...

Hey Snoink! Yay for whoever pressured you into writing and posting this. I think I may go and donate points to them! Lin got me a diary today. She said ...

Wow, Jent. This was horrible lol I started reading and I was like, "Oh my God! This can't be Jent's work. *Scrolls up* This IS Jent. Did someone hack into ...

'Zila! Thank you for the request. After such a beautiful phrasing, how does one refuse to review? ;) Azila, I agree with what Tiger said *pats Tiger and throws her ...

Hey there Paul! I read this way before it was featured and liked but never got around to replying. I think what I loved the most was the fact that ...

Skinsy, hello! Well, just read the first part and I'm going to comment here as a whole. I like the fact that you've changed the school thing. Mighty interesting. I ...

My daughter - So pleased to see this. I'm at work and must hurry but I wanted to comment. In itself, not much happens in this chapter. It feels more ...

Hey there Sincerity! I'm Tanya, here to review your work! First off, you have a very beautiful and eloquent writing style. It flowed quite easily off the page and into ...

Hey there Roost! First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you're enjoying your time here. I'm Tanya :D I wanted to start by mentioning that you're a talented writer. Your words ...