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Re: Stop and Stare (Part 8)
Shubhi, you weren't hopeless! I loved your review. Ahem- on to mind. I really don't have much to say, Skinsy, that Shubhi hasn't already said. What is it that attracts ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (5)
Snoink, tis me! Well, I loved this. I really love the bastard princess story. I was like, " come on, Daddy, tell her the rest!" haha. I really have no ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Kind-Hearted Lemonade
Hey there Gheala! Sorry for the delay but I haven't been on my computer in a few days. Turns out well, in a way, because you were able to edit. ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 7)
Hey Skinsy! First one here! (Oh yeah Mum. You heard. ) A huge part of me is proud. Another part wants to reach through the screen and slap you. *holds ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: To Kill A Unicorn [2/2]
Oh, Daughter, I loved this! I thought it was a great ending to this short story. Well, at least I thought so. I don't see how it was weak, I ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 1 (OUTDATED)
Hey there Violet, thanks for the request! Ah, reviewing after 'Zila and Pink is always difficult: they've mentioned all the good stuff! ;) I have to agree with them, though, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Disenchanting 3
Magnus! I will definitely be badgering you for more of this! haha :D I guess RH found the only nitpicks that were to be found. This is truly amazing. Your ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (4)
Snoink! You have *flailed* well ;) She hoped that Diamea would bless her daughter so that he daughter would be fit to rule the kingdom. So, every dinner, she would ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: To Kill A Unicorn [1/2]
Daughter. I am not at all upset that I'm not first. Not at all. Because I'd have to admit that I have a problem. And I don't. So there. Thank ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (3)
Hey there Snoink! You might be my only review for today so cheers! haha. I really enjoyed this chapter, more than the others, I think, because it was a nice ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Just a Little Query
Hey there WrittenSoul, First off, congrats on making this far! Second, have you tried googling query letters? That's how I learned to do mine, it was of great help! This ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter three
Hey there Dudette! Just read the 2nd chapter, but I didn't find anything to add. I thought this flowed nicely, much like the ones before. I still have issues with ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 9
Here I am, very nicely not pointing out that I am once again first. *coughs* Daughter, Jot's back! I laughed so much during this whole piece. Then, I quoted almost ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter one
Hey there Dudette! Thank you for the request. I haven't read romance in quite some time and this piece made me want to write some. So, kudos to you for ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies -Chapter Six
Hey there Icy, thanks for the request! Well, I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I'm just basing myself on this one. I thought it was a very ...
Mar 23, 2011
