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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Night in Love ~ chapter 1

    Hey there Walker! First here: yay! Okay, well, I thought this was quite interesting. I liked the narrator's voice, although at the beginning, when she spoke oh her love for ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do not click this.

    This amused me. I've seen it for weeks now but refused to click because it said so ;) Today, I decided to rebel. This made me smile. Tanya :D

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (7)

    Whoa, Snoink, how in the world did I miss the last chappy! I'm so out of it! I just read the previous chapter and this one. I really enjoyed the ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Whispering tower

    Hey there Toly! Well, this was a great beginning. I love the descriptions and details of the tower. Beautiful. Your dialogue tagging is an issue. Here's a great thread I ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)

    Daughter! Finally here! Oh gosh, why do you need me after such great reviews? Well, to not be redundant, I'd have to say that I was really confused about everything ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Objective of The Game

    Wifey, tis me! Sorry about the delay! :D First off, I have to agree with Violet about the scene at the beginning. I was so confused that he just went ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)

    Hey there Violet, I see the great Azila has gotten here before me *sigh* ;) As she said, this felt less like HG and if you're really taking this in ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 1 (OUTDATED)

    Violet, so sorry for the delay! Okay, well! Where to start after such great reviews! I'm on the fence here, between what Pink and Azila said. I like the fact ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Where the Wind Blows

    Tiff, this was beautiful. I loved it. Your characters were quite alive as I read, and I felt myself being pulled into the story. My only question is, why did ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 9)

    Skinsy, tis me! Well, can I say something? How about putting your spoilers at the end? Because it distracts me to read it at the beginning, and I concentrate and ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Faith: Chapter 3

    Hey there Jenny! Well, this chapter reminds me a lot of the other story I was following of yours. The man-boy relationship. This was beautifully written, of course, but I ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jackie Dear

    Wow, I loved this! Whatever fear you have, lay them to rest! This piece was brilliant, I assure you. The only nitpick I would have, and it's just a slight ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Seven

    Hey there Icy, thanks for the request! [quoteWe bought paint with the Harry’s earnings off the fruit stall and the main room was coloured pale yellow. ][/quote] but as Harry ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ~This Tree is Me~

    Walker, this was truly beautiful. The words were haunting and the narrator's voice was old and wise, in my mind. I could clearly picture the little boy and those eyes ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey there Fighta, Well, now I'm really confused. I was going to read this because it's got no reviews, but I know I've read this before. Have you edited? Well, ...

    Apr 5, 2011


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