borntobeawriter

It really really sucks when I have nothing to say. Really sucks, have I mentioned that? Well, this was a great chappy. Why? Because I like that Vara's becoming more ...

Snoink, tis me! Okay, well, this was an interesting chapter. Interesting in many ways. As in Hoas' adventures. My issue is actually something Kyou mentioned. Sometimes, Solea sounded very very ...

Hey there Violet! Okay, sorry it took me so long to get to, but Review Day is the perfect excuse to get to this, yes? Okay! There are several instances ...

Wifey, tis me again! If my sister hadn't mentioned reading chappy 1, I wouldn't have known it was out. But here I am! Okay, Vanessa is obviously a problem, unless ...

Okay, how in the world can I manage to do a thorough and lengthy review after all these great ones? And OMG, SnoinK! I need to move to Wine Country. ...

Hey there Katie! Glad you posted! Okay, well, I'm going to try to make this fast because I'm at work. Tenses : you're right, they're all over the place but ...

Geez. I need to come on here more often. I didn't even know this was posted! Thanks for letting me know, Skinsy. Okay, well. First, I was confused. Zoey in ...

Well there Ignis! I must say this was a surprise. I thought it was Argo who was going to die! I'm almost relieved that it's Morgan - does that make ...

Hey there! Well, this was definitely an interesting piece. When you got to the cottage in the woods, I was thinking Hansel & Gretel and all those tales. What I ...

Hey there Life, I'm Tanya, here to review. Well, ordinarily, I don't read these types of stories. Just a little too dark for my tastes. But this was good. I ...

Hey there Meg! Always a pleasure to read your work :D He slipped into a seat near the a wall and watched, ordering a beer when a staff member approached, ...

Uh oh.... Bastard children, little girl coming for Daddy. Well. Yeah. This was a disturbing chapter, but no worries, I am here! This chapter wasn't repetitive, thank you very much! ...

Hey there Anna. Thank you so much for letting me know this was posted. Might help if you gave the link, also. ;) I am quite awed by how effortless ...

Hey there Shubhi! Well, everything's been said, has it not? >.< Well, I thought this was interesting and different. You did well to portray Brandon's fear. I'd have to say ...

Me likee! Okay, well. Her plump bottom limp quivers before she takes a step forward. As she takes another elegant step, I step backwards, closer to the cliff’s edge lip. ...