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Re: The Cigarette
For the past week, I've been writing two to three flash fictions a day. This is the first one in my collection. Enjoy. [bHello! Booky here to review! Comments are ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: -Confessions of a Chronic Liar-
Unfortunately i dont have much time to write this, but here are three lightening fast edits: one. keep writing this. write and dont stop. the rest of the story will ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: The Cave Between Lands, Chapter One
My father is dead. I love abrupt lines! In the right context, they make everything sound poignant! The night he died, his body was brought to our house and thrown ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Stranger
You told me something once about a dream of yours.-i love the beginning! everything does start as a dream...hmm..inspiration coming on! All you wanted in the world was to be ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One - 17 Years Later
Reviews and advice welcome! :D Chapter One - Seventeen Years Later My name is Zam Turner. Teehee, I love starting with a note to the reader. It's so cozy! Note: ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Chains.
Hey! Awesome story btw, but there was one itsy bitsy thing that was an irritant: the transition of this: "I'm sorry Moya, I'll wrap them up in the onion skins ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: 100 Wishes
Oh how similar we are!!! I added my own array of wishes:) I'm bad, I know. I should be editing things and replying to reviews and generally doing something productive. ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Jealousy of the Sand
Hiya! Bookworm here to review-> feel free to PM me with any questions! Examining her, I try and see what he see's. Somehow, the wording is awkward here with the ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: A Bitter Beauty
Wow! First off, this theme is one that I have been obsessing over forever! I recently did a short character piece on 'the carcass of youth' that I might get ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: A Rainbow In The Wind (Contest Entry)
NOTE: This is for Elinor Brynn's Disney Songs contest, the details of which can be found here . It is based on Colours of the Wind from Pocahontas . And ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Fine, I Wrote a Love Poem.
A love poem for no one. It's pretty much my first love poem ever considering I really detest them. oh welll, enjoy (I hope). I must say, poetry is not ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Drift
Just a scene. I had no idea where I was going with it, so if you can think of a story to write around it. Go for it! Just PM ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Strewberries with Cream
Strawberries with cream This poem makes me tear a bit, and it is an excellent use of freuds remembrance of things past melt in my mouth as memories come back ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: The Christmas Code
Pagan rituals to compliment the season, to bring about the solistice to give us a reason. Standing tall, majestic, gift to the royalty of the UK. This somehow doesn't seem ...
Jan 2, 2011
