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and hey, more of this please.

where can i see the first part?

where the hell's next?

yeah, thaks snoink, i think those were potent observations, would keep those in mind, guess i woudl be writing romance stuff in guys' eyes instead, can't seem to have the ...

I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a ...

I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a ...

OK. As soon as I get the cjance, translating it would be awfully hard as the conjugation and use of pronouns are different and might affect the story as whole. ...

this one's nice. i would not, though make a detailed review until i get to read the entire material, but you got something her, i should say...

where's the next part? =)

I won't pretend that i'm quite good critiquing... anyway... you got a good only concern though was that you focused so much with minor details... and consequently left the major ...