blustarr9009

*claps her hands in excitement* yay! chapter two. ok, ok, yeah, i really liked it. a few of your descriptions were a little confusing. Roach Motel, six weeks of free ...

All semblance of warmth was drained by the echo, leaving behind only a startlingly inhuman voice. ‘Machines truly able to think, consider, and feel. These qualities, long thought to be ...

i agree. it's a really good story, but it needs more detail. also the switching from past tense to present tense makes it hard to understand whats going on. but ...