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Well, this was certainly the most unique play I have ever was strange,but in a good way. An author's job is to create original characters, and mission accomplished! All the ...

bluewaterlily at your service to review your work. red=corrections blue=comments I know the part with the old man is short and unsatisfactory--I'm planning on expanding that sometime soon. For now, ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. red=corrections green= delete blue=comments The Cherry Wood Forest surrounded me as I ran. My legs throbbed , and my short breaths came less and ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. Red=corrections Blue=comments *I wasn't too sure about the rating; there's blood and emotional trauma in this first chapter, so i guess watch out for ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. Red=-corrections Blue=Comments Green=Delete Purple=Capitalize ***Okay, so this is my first story on here and it's a true story. It's more or less a rough ...

I like this story, and I`d like to read more. I guess Abbey is one of the good girls, and it`s real obvious that Jake is one of the"bad boys." ...

bluewaterlily here to reveiw your work. red=correcions blue=comments An old piece with a few tweaks. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I like this story; it`s really good. Kadety and Justin seem like interesting characters, so do Ryan and Allyson. Though I think you should work on Allyson`s reaction when she ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. Red=corrections Blue=comments [quote="Riveneye"]Okay here's Story number four in the collection of short stories I'm working on. I've formatted it right this t

This was a good story. I liked how you described things, especially at the beginning of the story; it really sets the mood.The suspense and mystery kept me reading.The way ...

bluewaterlily here to review your poem. Flight Towards Freedom By Lord SvaTantra Fear, rejection and silent screams; They seek for approval and freedom dreams. I like this stanza alot. Their ...

bluewaterlily here to review your story. The street was dark. The darkness therein was not one wistful, poetic—it was ugly, and thick as a lumpy quilt. There was no one ...

Bluewaterlily here to review your script. Red=Corrections Blue=Comments Green=Add // I wrote this yesterday when I was angry at someone I care about, and I just need someone to tell ...

Bluewaterlily at your service for a review. Red=corrections Green=comments [quote="bumblebee99"]OK so Basically this is the second time i have posted this it didn't work the first time so I'm trying ...

Bluewaterlily at your service for a review. Red=corrections Green=how I would have written it Dear reader, My name will stay unknown to you. I will trust you are a good ...