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Thank you so much for the critique, it shed some light on some concerns I had with my own writing :) I definitely did initially want this to be a ...

Thank you so much Dossereana for both the compliments and the critique, and I would say they are well-warranted. You totally weren't being harsh or mean, so thank you for ...

Wow, you are really really good. I liked the piece very much, and I do want to read more. You paint some vivid imagery with your words.