bloodybelle01

No problem :) And yes, it is fixed now!

I meant make...

No problem :) and yeah, I kind of agree with you on the map musician thing (although I play the flute so it is more of an issue of jaw ...

No problem! I'm happy to help :D

I totally forgot that I hadn't critiqued the actual content of your story! I usually do that before grammar... so here it is! This chapter was a bit of an ...

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No problem :)

I came up with it all myself! A star is the manifestation of a soul as the human realm sees them so if a human went in their physical form ...

I have read them... I can see the resemblance but they are definitely going in very different directions... In the book itself it explains how the realms are messed up ...

I like the length of the review! And I am noticing that the chapters are seeming a bit skeletal... these are first drafts so when I get around to editing ...

Thanks a lot for the enthusiastic review- it was really great and encouraging and informative!

There is description of the place in the previous chapter :) Elissa is slightly slow on the uptake with a lot of things so it will take a while for ...

Yeah, it definitely is a bit of an info dump, isn't it? I explain what a wandering spirit is in the next chapter and it is the premise of a ...

I figured that out afterwords..... and thank you!

Yeah, thanks :)