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I was really taken by your story. The amount of work you put into it makes other stories look unprofessional. There was a lot of space in between the title ...

I really enjoyed your story. It really made me feel as if I was in Ancient China. However, I would do some grammar corrections and capitalization corrections. I also wonder ...

I liked the content of the story and the way it started out. I liked how it started and how you wrote your first parts of the story an how ...

I like you story. I thought that it had some good context to it and it had some info that was a little bit weird. Although some was different it ...